| 2007-06-07 01:29:17 |
Babysitting the Twins Again
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I liked it, I'd probably let someone do that to me. Keep writing!! |
| 2007-06-07 09:57:59 |
Babysitting the Twins Again
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fuck ya... |
| 2007-06-07 17:56:01 |
Babysitting the Twins Again
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I loved this story! the absolute best! |
| 2007-06-08 09:15:57 |
Babysitting the Twins Again
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Work on your grammar! You need to figure out if you want to write in the past tense or the present and go read some books to take hints on better sentence structure before your stories are really worth reading. |
| 2007-06-08 17:50:25 |
Babysitting the Twins Again
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I like the charater development. I like the story line, |