| 2007-06-13 01:43:06 |
Babysitting the Twins Again
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Amazing. Please write more |
| 2007-06-14 01:59:15 |
Babysitting the Twins Again
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Did some one actually reference "Digimon"?What a F**king dork, i mean come on.I liked it alot,Keep on writing.Personally i disgree with the boys C*ck sizes, i am a man, and at 14 going on 15, i had a package worthy of prase, nothing huge, but prase worthy, you kept mentioning these boys had small parts, make it funnier, and since its fiction anyway, make em alittle bigger, make her actually enjoy the size, but thats just my view.Good work, but spelling and grammer need a soft tune up. |
| 2007-06-14 15:53:57 |
Babysitting the Twins Again
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ok great righting except u gotta use sounds like ooooohh an aaaahhhh, its just annoying to read 25 pgs worth and then read and then i was full of semen. fix tht and ull easily be great writer |
| 2007-06-17 19:18:13 |
Babysitting the Twins Again
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Totally awesome. You could probably do some more, and i look forward to it. |
| 2007-06-18 01:17:29 |
Babysitting the Twins Again
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I liked the part when Bobby was anal fucking the bear and the bear had dirrareah and he shitted all over bobby! and then they all ate shit shit shit fuckfuckfuckfcukc I BIT MY OWN DICK OFF Digimon sex is cooler. |