| 2007-05-25 21:28:06 |
My sister, the bitch... chapter 2
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Yea it was an attempt, a very terrible one, after the first few sentences i told my self it whould suck and guess what? it fuckin did. |
| 2007-05-26 00:00:23 |
My sister, the bitch... chapter 2
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This isn't a sex story. It's the outline of a sex story. Horrible. |
| 2007-05-26 02:00:39 |
My sister, the bitch... chapter 2
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iwant to thank you for trying to write a sequel to a great story, but, as it is a great story, it is hard to follow up with something as good... my suggestion is to rewrite if possible, add more description, make it longer, and try to think of more original situations. thanks for trying though. |
| 2007-05-26 06:07:17 |
My sister, the bitch... chapter 2
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considering you have the highest rating for part 1 this is very dissapointing sorry 3/10 |
| 2007-05-26 16:40:28 |
My sister, the bitch... chapter 2
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you suck ass |