| 2007-07-04 11:33:30 |
My sister, the bitch... chapter 2
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this was bad too many people got involved |
| 2007-07-08 08:32:38 |
My sister, the bitch... chapter 2
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come up with your own damn storieies and not steal other peoples stuff, this storie fucking blew, you suck, 1/10 |
| 2007-09-14 04:52:41 |
My sister, the bitch... chapter 2
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that was fucking awsome, you should have made it a little longer but otherwise it was perfect and hell add me in there. |
| 2007-09-30 10:43:33 |
My sister, the bitch... chapter 2
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tyhe first was really good, i didnt enjoy this one as much, the start was horrible and didnt improve to much. pobly woulda gone better if stuck with your own story instead of trying continue someoen elses, writing styyle makes big difference |
| 2008-01-16 03:05:05 |
My sister, the bitch... chapter 2
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This really sucked. First of all where did all the other people come from. Second it wasn't your story to continue. 1/10 |