| 2007-05-30 17:36:01 |
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get dad and mom to come into the next one. now that would be a good story |
| 2007-05-31 09:20:58 |
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your writing style is very confusing ... try proof-reading by someone else ... and simplify the thoughts into multiple sentences. BC. |
| 2007-05-31 15:46:39 |
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I really liked this series i dont like megan in it she kinda ruinz it a bit whats upsettin at the start i wonted it them 2 =) |
| 2007-05-31 18:09:28 |
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would someone else like to proofread my stories? |
| 2007-06-01 19:06:40 |
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amazing series, i hope for a 7th part. the sis fight could be almost real. how about you let proof Aaron love to Carly in next parts? |