| 2007-06-17 23:03:22 |
Noc 6
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Great! Very descriptive and erotic. The fighting part was very realistic. Shows imagination on your part. Next! 8/10 |
| 2007-10-18 05:13:32 |
Noc 6
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Well done el_hanes, liked the sis fight, it hit reality status mate |
| 2007-12-03 00:40:08 |
Noc 6
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the fighting makes it real man but let it take you wherever its good man 10/10 |
| 2007-05-30 20:25:28 |
My Cousin Tom: Part 2
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very good, i almost came, wtrite aother "tom" story 8/10 |
| 2007-05-31 02:16:52 |
My Cousin Tom: Part 2
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good story....I am very hard now |