| 2007-06-06 22:02:16 |
Babysitting Amanda
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hot but work on grammar and keepin the names straight all in all good story 7/10 |
| 2007-06-06 22:30:46 |
Babysitting Amanda
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more more |
| 2007-06-06 22:36:16 |
Babysitting Amanda
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it was good.a couple of grammer and plot errors(amanda was 14 in the begining and it said she was 13 in the end) but a very exciting and original story 9/10 |
| 2007-06-06 22:41:53 |
Babysitting Amanda
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good story. i have to agree with the others. Need for paragraphs and keeping namas strait. Over all not bad 7/10 |
| 2007-06-06 22:49:27 |
Babysitting Amanda
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who needs a freakin babysitter in high school?? |