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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-06-07 09:44:53 | A freaky step daughter | well it made me cum! |
| 2007-06-07 20:46:26 | A freaky step daughter | Bubaroski; I was really turned on, and decided to look at some stories, I found yours and was interested in it...Sadly you're dissorganization turned me off, and I could barly understand what you were trying to say, for a second I thought I was skipping lines. I was wrong. You have a good plot, but need you use paragraphs, more creative word choice, and better grommor. Threw stumbling threw your sentences I still thought it was a good story. Godd luck with your other stories. 4/10. From Ashley. |
| 2007-06-08 11:07:47 | A freaky step daughter | First off its grammar not grommor, and its good not godd, this is just for the previous commenters knowledge. And for the story, it wasnt that bad, sure some of the spelling was off, but really and to all you who complained about that, this is for you, WHO THE FUCK CARES!!!!!! its a damn sex story not a novel, not a freaking newspaper article where that kind of shit matters. its a damn sex story, you read it to have some fun and enjoy yourself, if you can sit there and read that sort of story and do nothing but look for errors than you are a fucking retard and loser, but anyway, the story was good man, keep writing, looking forward to part 2, remember just wright, dot pay attention to the bullshiters out there 9.5/10 =) |
| 2007-06-08 16:28:04 | A freaky step daughter | its a good story... great plot but you should add abit more animals in it for fun... dont listen to other people badmouthing you they are just jwalous of your writing skills |
| 2007-06-10 20:39:09 | A freaky step daughter | Your story was good but....spell check and proof read. In your case proof read it twice. It is just a little hard to read the way it is. |