| 2007-06-03 10:58:54 |
learning how to make love
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he does say its fantasy so he could be sixty for all you know |
| 2007-06-03 13:47:20 |
learning how to make love
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learn to write...you suck |
| 2007-06-03 15:14:20 |
learning how to make love
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I'm gonna kick your ass! 2/10. |
| 2007-06-03 15:18:55 |
learning how to make love
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Piece of shit with lousy spelling, poor grammar, crapy non-plot, too short, disjointed, basically you write like a child. At least you didn't use that stupid texting shorthand shit. 1/10. |
| 2007-06-03 18:29:59 |
learning how to make love
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Jeeeezus, what a piece of crap. Don't ever write again until you learn how to spell, how to properly use grammar, how to actually tell a believable story. After reading this shit, I believe the "author" truly is a 12-year-old. 0/10 |