| 2007-06-05 00:17:24 |
learning how to make love
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I know retards more intelligent than you. |
| 2007-06-05 03:56:46 |
learning how to make love
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Easily the worst collection of words ever assembled.. Language and grammar structure could not have been worse, and the tale itself was even worse. In short, the entire group of words (cannot justify calling it a story) was horrific, and the theme was utterly disgusting. |
| 2007-06-05 04:57:25 |
learning how to make love
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hahaha, after 5 hours of porn, his penis finally started to get hard. |
| 2007-06-05 08:46:53 |
learning how to make love
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Most sic- est collection I ever came acroos in this site. Be a reader 1st then venture to write. Sex is not the only criteria, how you see it & tell it is the THING. |
| 2007-06-05 18:40:16 |
learning how to make love
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meh it was alright, there needs to be a part two though, and the story did move along a little fast, anyways, 8.5/10 keep writing |