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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-06-10 04:21:12 | Babysitting Amanda, Part 2: The Mom Comes Home | Yeah right ass wipe, Get a life dick breath talk shit but can't give your name, shows your ass wipe mentallity. You wouldn't know a good story if it hit you square in the balls dick head |
| 2007-06-10 15:28:23 | Babysitting Amanda, Part 2: The Mom Comes Home | storydude, get a life, Unless you can say why my story is so bad, you're just another low-life troller. |
| 2007-06-14 02:04:59 | Babysitting Amanda, Part 2: The Mom Comes Home | parts 1 and 2 have potential, but need a serious re-write to make them good/believable. like fixing the age or personality of becky (12 and acts like 6), and a 16 yr old and a 40 yr old going for a dozen times a day. |
| 2007-07-15 23:59:28 | Babysitting Amanda, Part 2: The Mom Comes Home | I think the ending is a bit weak You have a strong story, for the most part, but then it seems like thought it got too long or were bored with it, and ended it in a paragraph. There were also a few spelling errors, the wrong named used (as happened in the first), and a few other minor detalis such as that. But, it's almost above "typical" stories for this site. Almost. I think if you planned the story out better, or spent more time with it (for isntance, writing several drafts), it would come out to be a pure, 10/10. I think you could do it, jsut need to spend more time. I gave it a 10/10, by the way. |
| 2007-07-16 00:15:29 | Babysitting Amanda, Part 2: The Mom Comes Home | Correction. 8/10 Better than a lot, not as good as a lot. But better than more than ones it's not as good as. |