| 2007-06-09 06:13:03 |
Babysitter Gets Caught
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very nicely done, great flow of the story |
| 2007-06-12 12:36:14 |
Babysitter Gets Caught
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WOW THAT WAS GREAT,, MY WIFE WISHES IT WAS HER IN THE STORY,, WE BOTH CAME WHILE READING IT.... |
| 2007-06-12 21:13:13 |
Babysitter Gets Caught
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wicked cool |
| 2007-06-13 11:21:47 |
Babysitter Gets Caught
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Thanks for all of the positive feedback. Makes me want to write another. |
| 2007-06-14 11:45:29 |
Babysitter Gets Caught
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Im a girl and its hard for me to get into a story written for a guy but this was great!! I loved it, MORE!! |