| 2007-07-30 03:59:22 |
Lisa @ 4
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great story I have done it too. |
| 2007-08-07 03:57:00 |
Lisa @ 4
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Gr8t Stoey, although it transition into consensual sex, there are mant older Gents that have active sex lives with young Kids. Maybe a bit too young for me, but a good one. keep up with next one. more details tho, as if it was really happening & how the little girl responded to the sex act. |
| 2007-08-13 18:38:44 |
Lisa @ 4
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I think you should definatly continue writing this story or another one extremely similar... You are one of the best writers i've seen so far! =) |
| 2007-08-19 14:59:35 |
Lisa @ 4
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Great stry, as always, SexWriter. Except for a couple of grammar mistakes and misplaced question marks (I don't blame you for that one, I figure that's the computer's fault), I think it's fantastic. I always love your work. Perfect 10. Please continue writing, don't ever stop! I'd love to see a sequel to this. |
| 2007-08-20 21:58:24 |
Lisa @ 4
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You know, I really do try to be non judgemental when I read these stories. Yes, this story was well written but in spite of that it was quite sick. Perhaps 9 or 10 is more appropriate. I wonder what would happen if the mother found out?? |