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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-06-11 01:46:26 | wolves in the forrest part 1 | seemed a little weird to me at first but once i got into it it was great keep writing dude ill be reading part 2 once i get the time |
| 2007-06-11 02:35:51 | wolves in the forrest part 1 | Kick ass. |
| 2007-06-11 13:00:50 | wolves in the forrest part 1 | You sometimes change from first person (I ......) to third person (she .....). Please stick to one or the other. Ask someone to proof-read your work, you have too many misspellings. |
| 2007-06-11 16:03:57 | wolves in the forrest part 1 | Very random, doesn't make much sense but it actually has a plot, which is much better than many stories on this site. Good overall, Would be improved by proof reading though |
| 2007-06-11 17:05:36 | wolves in the forrest part 1 | XD Yay! The writer ish mine! o.o; Anyway I was the first to read side story... ^^ Its really good |