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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-08-02 11:24:59 | wolves in the forrest part 1 | Well done, a very long and interesting tale, quite erotic as well. The only issues I have are the spelling mistakes, I suggest proof-reading it. Other than that I found it very enjoyable. |
| 2007-08-21 09:17:57 | wolves in the forrest part 1 | Very good. A bit confusing with the misspellings and switching between third and first person, but great otherwise. Cant wait for part two |
| 2007-09-10 13:53:19 | wolves in the forrest part 1 | why does everibody care so much about spelling the story rocked it was great fuck spelling |
| 2007-10-02 22:29:40 | wolves in the forrest part 1 | exellent story and descriptive... if it didn't have any of the erotic stuff it would probably be publishable... HECK! it's probably publishable now! hope to read more of your work! |
| 2007-10-08 16:01:16 | wolves in the forrest part 1 | Repeated paragraphs, spelling errors, but, overall good story. =3 |