| 2007-10-02 22:29:26 |
wolves in the forrest part 2
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this was the best story i've read in a long time and I hope that you will make another one soon. the perspective changes were unexpected and equally entertaining. good erotic scenes and it has everything from love to hate and everything inbetween. I'd like to see when black finally does die like all dogs would, will she return to her home or stay with the pack? that would be an interesting third part. |
| 2007-10-05 13:33:12 |
wolves in the forrest part 2
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This is a kick ass Story! |
| 2007-11-02 21:17:25 |
wolves in the forrest part 2
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good story....seriously...if it can make me turn off the TV and send the world to shut up it must be good XD |
| 2007-11-08 08:17:25 |
wolves in the forrest part 2
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10/10 that was brillant, your writing style is the best i have seen on this site. If you wrote a book on this i would be first in line to buy, the story, sheer amazing and the characters, sex parts, family parts and inbetween are absolute brillance. I have nothing at all to say on improving out taking out. your stoery rocks, hope you make more! |
| 2007-12-05 13:12:32 |
wolves in the forrest part 2
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just read this again loved it |