| 2007-08-13 23:14:31 |
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a perfect story. i would have never thought something could be written this well, i love the phscic effect on it, bravo 10/10 |
| 2007-08-14 04:01:23 |
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Worthy Title of the best story on the site.
If there was no sex scenes, this would be an excellent children's novel.
Whoever wrote this is probably a famous author. |
| 2007-08-14 12:43:31 |
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Best story i read so far and it allways will be.
XD |
| 2007-08-15 20:06:48 |
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Fabulous! Make it into a book! seriously yoo'l make millions! =d loved it! and your right it did take 3 weeks to read =D but it was worth it! |
| 2007-08-16 14:46:44 |
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You should consider to continuing the story with them getting older I bet it would be great |