| 2008-02-12 21:51:07 |
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The first 5 voters have produced a low score - comments please on how you rate it; I'm always trying to do something different but sometimes readers seem to want a more formula approach. |
| 2008-02-12 23:03:16 |
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Well don't worry about what everybody says, I thought it was a very good story!! |
| 2008-02-13 02:30:43 |
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I found the transition from jealous husband to fascinated voyeur a bit too abrupt. Nevertheless I enjoyed it enough to give it 9/10. I am sick of how-X-lost-his/her-virginty stories. This is different. |
| 2008-02-13 10:18:21 |
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That was very nice and well written. Thank you. |
| 2008-02-15 09:32:31 |
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Peter,
I know for a fact that there are "readers" on this site who get their jollies by giving good stories low ratings. Don't let it bother you. This was a good effort on your part and I enjoyed it. 9/10
George in Cincy |