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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-06-22 19:34:49 | Hidden Valley of Fertility | Boring so damn stupid piece of shit |
| 2007-07-05 04:26:54 | Hidden Valley of Fertility | This was the bet story I've read on here for at least a YEAR!!! This would be basically my dream, you are an artist, a visionary. Hats off to you, you desirve my upmost respect :) |
| 2007-07-05 15:54:07 | Hidden Valley of Fertility | I enjoyed the story, but ti do so I had to continually try to ignore the authors harping on the too young ages of the girls involved. Would it have ruined the story to have added a few years to the ages of the girls? Anyone who answered that yes I now address along with the author: Pedofiles are the most widely reviled of all sociopaths. and I condemn your use of this fantasy to titilate that breed of pervert . |
| 2007-07-06 02:30:46 | Hidden Valley of Fertility | Was pretty nice, but you really need older girls. You basically describe them as being sixteen or seventeen, but you directly state the ages as younger and younger. I do commend you for knowing what a paragraph is, though you wrote it like a f-line poem. Still good though. |
| 2007-07-10 02:32:33 | Hidden Valley of Fertility | great story, wonderful story line, and you have it well written too. as for the ages while they are young in the end they get pretty young, i suppose its just your perception of things no harm no foul its a story right? as for everything else it was wonderful i wouldnt mind crash landing there. |