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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-06-16 13:46:59 | Horny loving brother chapter 1 | Pretty good, but I would like a detailed description of the sister's body and add some eroticism. Don't let them simply fuck, but draw it out for a bit. 7/10. |
| 2007-06-16 16:15:58 | Horny loving brother chapter 1 | It reads like you're writing in a hurry, that's ok as far as it goes but we need more of how she looks, etc. How hot are you, and suff like that. Excite me boy, i gv u a 9 |
| 2007-06-16 23:59:16 | Horny loving brother chapter 1 | looks like this story is going over very well, it currently has the highest rating of anything I've submitted to this forum so far, 8.0 with 36 votes - and no, I never vote on my own stories no matter how tempted I am to do it. By the way, when it come to details I tend to be a minimalist. I put in just a few details buried in the story to help people along but most of the details I leave to your imagination. But sometimes, even when I include details like hair color and length people miss it because they seem to get caught up in the story. I just finished chapter 2 of this story, look for it to show up in a couple days. |
| 2007-06-17 01:08:11 | Horny loving brother chapter 1 | fuck mate great story. Can not wait for the next one 8/10 |
| 2007-06-17 01:11:43 | Horny loving brother chapter 1 | Good job, keep it coming. |