| 2007-06-18 10:35:53 |
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Wow Britney I loved your story. keep writing baby, it was good. |
| 2007-06-18 11:52:53 |
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a great story let's have a chapter 3 & more............. |
| 2007-06-18 12:33:59 |
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Consistency in a story is importent because when you jump around and forget who is fucking whom, it throws the story out of kilter. Furthermore, Britney's actions are out of sync with her previous experience with Todd. Afterall, she promised to make things right with her husband Jeff and just 2 short years later, she's cheating on him again. Just let them get divorced and be done with it. As for Jeff, the husband...he was cheating on Britney with Todd's wife and men have 2 weaknesses. Sex and money...if he's making enough money, then who's he fucking and why isn't Britney suspicious?
Last but not least, quit doing the same shit over and over again. The shit she's doing to her husbands stuff is indicative of a woman who is leaving her husband, not someone just out to get her jollies off. |
| 2007-07-15 15:33:34 |
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I agree with the previous poster. I want to know who Jeff is fucking and why they are still together. No man is going to diss his wife like that unless he's got something else on the side. Maybe you can finish it off in Ch. 3... |
| 2008-04-06 04:13:24 |
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Hi britney! I thinkk your stories are the best.I was married once and my wife cheated on me several times and it turned me on endlessly.Though we are no longer married I hope I can find someone to be with who could act like you do in your stories.Your stories give me hope.Thankyou and keep writing |