| 2007-06-18 09:53:41 |
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realy long but it was one of the best i read |
| 2007-06-18 10:20:54 |
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yeah break it down, great story though , 8/10 just break it down and your lookin at top marks, maybe 3 chapters at a time?? |
| 2007-06-18 10:22:24 |
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TO MY SWEET LADY JADE... YOU HAVE SHARED SO MUCH OF YOURSELF WITH ME, AND YOU'VE CHANGED MY LIFE FOREVER...I LOVE YOU SO MUCH AND I CAN'T WAIT TO MAKE YOU HAPPY IN YOUR PANTIES!
ROGER |
| 2007-06-18 12:16:18 |
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amazing story :) |
| 2007-06-18 13:20:06 |
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excellent story ... could you please tell the original author to write down a part 2 ? may be the one in which he took them to the trip over spring break ? thanks ... |