| 2007-07-02 22:25:09 |
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Holy crap, that was long. It was a nicely written though. Thumbs up to the original author. |
| 2007-07-03 16:20:31 |
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no reason to be angry at Quinn315 u nubcakes.
1. it's Fiction
2. he didn't write it, it was sent to him as he said.
lolz i just reckon some people are guilty after they masturbated and came and saw that cum going down their leg over young girl lust. |
| 2007-07-04 00:53:03 |
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best story i have ever read!! ... 100 out of 10!! |
| 2007-07-04 02:16:52 |
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Best story ever! 10/10 |
| 2007-07-04 12:15:32 |
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You should rewrite it, editing out the porn aspects and submit it as a short story to a magazine or publisher. You are wasting your time if you are anything else but a writer. |