| 2007-07-11 18:13:47 |
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This was THE best story I've read so far and it was written as if it was real. I would love for it to be real though I think it's highly unlikely. People criticizing such a fantastic are fucking dumbasses!
10/10 here from Denmark :) |
| 2007-07-12 05:31:49 |
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quite seriously anyone who enjoys the seduction part of this story.. actually any of it needs some help but i guess better imagination than real life |
| 2007-07-12 11:57:04 |
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Well there is one thing that you have gotten across to the public, By writing this type of story ! We all know what kind of Freaky sex thoughts you have !!!! |
| 2007-07-12 15:56:30 |
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Job well done. The suject matter is not my cup of tea but the story line is great. 10/10. As for people who critisize this, just becuase an author writes about sensitive subjest that you may not like you still need to appreciate good art when you see it. |
| 2007-07-12 19:35:02 |
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When you get passed the porn aspect this is a very good well written story. Again this is fantasy know and I think a lot of people don't give this particular story the respect it deserves. It's more than all the other stories that I have read on here. This has the be best story I have ever read on Xnxx and that's saying a hell of a lot. |