| 2007-08-06 20:38:00 |
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This is a good story. Long but good :) |
| 2007-08-07 14:38:09 |
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that was good as stories go, long but good. dont like the pedophile part of it bu ok |
| 2007-08-08 09:55:19 |
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that was a great story. i was sorry when it ended, extremely well written.
and to all those people who think it's perverted etc etc, for christ's sake, it's fiction...
people are allowed to imagine whatever they want, and if they like, put it on paper |
| 2007-08-09 10:11:25 |
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this was a fantastic story, long, but i really liked it |
| 2007-08-10 02:26:52 |
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Amazing story the one minus was the pedophile none the less is was a great well written story I would'nt be surprised if they made a book from this. |