| 2007-08-17 03:36:25 |
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While the sex was beautifully written, the story as a whole stands on it's own as a superlative piece of fiction. An excellent story and as another person has said, without the sex or sexuality it could well become a children's book. |
| 2007-08-17 04:20:27 |
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9-10 years old? fucking pedofile |
| 2007-08-18 13:15:19 |
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while im not fond of men with little gurl stories.. or the very concept of pedophilia as a whole.. ..quite honestly i find it kind of disturbing.. ..i was compelled to read this one seeing as how it has been top rated for several weeks now..
having done so i have to admit as a whole the story is endearing.. compelling.. immersive.. whimsical.. expertly written.. and while depicting a children's author.. minus the sexual content.. could be the premise to stand alone children's title in and of itself..
i must admit.. an excellent story.. once i started reading i couldnt stop til i had read it all.. i actually would like to know who authored it.. my only qualm would have to be for the sexual content to have been different.. but otherwise an excellent piece.. |
| 2007-08-19 08:21:00 |
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This story is so very touching and so very well written. Does anyone know who the actual author is? To Reader from 8-17-07 4:20, the genre and content of this story were clearly stated at the beginning. You shouldn't read stories that offend you and shouldn't waste our time with your comments. You're stupid. |
| 2007-08-19 22:06:04 |
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to the reader before me: 08-19-07 - 08:21. amen brother. so many people come and claim to be offended, its stated clear as fucking day. if you dont like it, dont read it . |