| 2007-09-22 21:31:46 |
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The story was so long I avoided reading it for some time before I was convinced to by the high rating. Now I see why it was so well received. If ever a convincing case was made for childhood sexuality this was it. But of course, it was a work of fiction. No clever writing makes Susan believable. No mother would respond to hearing a 30+ year old man just fucked her twin 10-year-olds with a "Oh well, you sure didn't waste any time." But other than that the sex was carefully crafted and realistic, and the psychic abilities of the girls makes them precocious and wise beyond their years, making sex with them seem less a theft of innocence. An excellently written story, and is sure to get its author stoned or worse by most people. My best friend's five year old daughter once deliberately poked my dick firmly with her finger, giggling mischievously all the while, while I stood talking to her mother. So little girls do have "dirty minds" and do possess big girl sexuality. It is courageous to discuss it, but very exciting too. . Kudos on a brave and erotic story. |
| 2007-09-22 23:23:17 |
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to reader at 09-22-07 - 08:26
lololol......quinn just played you like a violin. he said you would cry some more and here you are proving him right. all you want to do is argue lick a little bitch. quinn has the top rated series here and i believe what he said about why you are angry. get you little bitch panties out of a bunch and let it go little bitch......lololol |
| 2007-09-26 06:30:41 |
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2 Long Story,
a bit sick 2 lmao
but it was quite good yeah,
its a bit weird 2 write something like that,
girls that young,
2 long as well hehe i give it 4 !
x |
| 2007-09-26 16:11:24 |
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I agree with 9-22 21 31
Awesome story |
| 2007-09-30 05:36:47 |
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i agree with 08:26, the author did'nt respond to the accusations and that's cowardly. they now have a ring of truth.
as for the story, i did'nt even get a hardon, let alone a wank. pisspore! 0/10 |