| 2007-09-30 10:08:12 |
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hey, 21:31 your full of shit or suking quinn's cock.
what a crock of shit!... the story sux. 0/10 |
| 2007-10-02 00:39:21 |
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I don't know what to think. This was written really well, but I am kind of grossed out by the fact that the girls were only 9/10 in this story. I don't think I would have minded as much if they were at least 13 or 14, but that is still wrong. You could have also made the guy a little younger, but this is your story, and you did a good job writing it. I know, I just contradicted myself, but I don't give a flying fuck. |
| 2007-10-02 18:08:02 |
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hey dickhead, do u read these storys just to jerk off and then critisise fuck u it was awsme |
| 2007-10-02 22:33:43 |
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Wow that was amazing. My eyes kinda hurt after the long read but it was well worth it. In my opinion, the story would have been even greater without the sexual stuff, but this being a porn site, it was expected. I actually cared about the characters, which is more than I can say about some novels I've read. This is the best story I've ever read online. |
| 2007-10-04 21:30:32 |
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Piece o shit, way too long, 1/10 |