| 2007-11-20 10:17:32 |
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WHOA! LOLOLOL....DUDE....GET A HOBBY OR SOMETHING.....SERIOUSLY YOUR SPENDING WAYYYYY TO MUCH TIME ON SOMETHING THAT NOBODY FUCKING CARES ABOUT BUT YOU.....IS THIS LIKE THE 20TH COMMENT YOU LEFT HERE? LOLOLOL |
| 2007-11-20 21:37:27 |
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Nice story...Good story line |
| 2007-11-21 00:06:42 |
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this story took me a week to read this. But in the end of every chapter you deliver. amazing. 10/10 |
| 2007-11-22 18:54:54 |
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great story u should become a professional writer m8. may have been better in 2 half chapters 1-5 and chapters 5-10 but that just mu opinon to make easier reading. Only real shame is the few negative comments - all i have to say to the people that wrote them is if u dont like reading this sort of stuff then **** off and leave the site u sad people, |
| 2007-11-24 02:04:44 |
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amazing |