| 2007-12-24 19:14:13 |
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The best 10/10 |
| 2007-12-26 01:55:05 |
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wow....if your an incest you might as well be gay b/c thats bassically what you people are, and you'll burn in hell but then again your not religious, just some pethetic losers.
heres a prediction for some dude thats probably gonna comment this "then why are you on here". Well you see, its because this is too fucking funny, that people actually do this shit and write these stories. FUCKING LOSERS |
| 2007-12-26 21:31:37 |
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WTF ppl comon! a 32 yr old fuckin' 2 10 yr olds & u made it into a story! wonder what the mom is gonna think when she reads that? i mean, thats a 22 yr age difference! even if it was just a fantacy ur fuckin' sick! O & dont make the story so long next time. |
| 2007-12-27 02:10:13 |
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this sucks to long |
| 2007-12-29 02:07:07 |
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For as much of a single thought, I was pleased that you were very careful in how you've chosen your words, how you frased certain times and events according to the story!!!
Well Done!!!
Everyone will want to make his or her own remarks as to how you , the author , should write your story...
I believe that you should write what's in heart wheather it's good for you or them....
10/10 |