| 2005-03-06 23:02:56 |
Lost in London - part 13 - End
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I like your story but i think you should make another part to it 9/10 |
| 2005-08-20 03:12:30 |
Lost in London - part 13 - End
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ending was a bit bad, too rushed, I think another part to it would make it better, good job though |
| 2004-06-17 15:26:36 |
A Mining Colony-Prison part 1
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i have know idea what you thought thatw as but i didnt even know what th hell that was about i skipped like every damn paragraph it was so boring> |
| 2004-06-24 03:33:21 |
A Mining Colony-Prison part 1
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that was GAY |
| 2004-10-19 16:09:11 |
A Mining Colony-Prison part 1
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I read the first paragraph and stopped. That was more than gay. |