| 2007-11-17 00:25:12 |
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kind of long, i found myself skipping a lot of the story just so i could get through it. good writing though |
| 2007-11-23 22:04:52 |
Lockdown
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took a while to get going but when it did really hot touched on a lot of taboos to bad something like this couldnt happen in real life |
| 2007-11-23 23:55:04 |
Lockdown
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it could happen but nearly impossible who gona spray sperm on a 7yr old |
| 2007-11-25 01:36:51 |
Lockdown
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Great story. I liked being able to actually read and understand the words, unlike a lot of other stories. I was turned off by Alyssa though. That kinda thing is pretty gross to me. |
| 2007-11-27 21:58:52 |
Lockdown
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great story and a lot of talent. Seven year old was a bit young though. |