| 2008-01-24 00:35:17 |
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Good, but I agree. 7? I liked how this closely resembled a real screenplay, and had actual plot, drama and characters. Unusual for this site. That's why I stick to incest stories, not because I find incest a turn on, but the quality is generally better, details about everything and such. Less character info to relate to. everything applies to both characters. Any how, I really liked this story, but I don't think a part 2 is possible. I'd like to see you write more though, not necessarily about this or with the same characters. |