| 2007-06-25 05:47:30 |
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Damn, I would have just agreed to stay and fucked her every day...anyway you fail as a writer. your writing style makes me want to vomit. |
| 2007-06-25 23:37:21 |
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he didnt fail asswipe, shut the fuck up, if your going to say somthing demoralizing like that then just get the fuck out of here, the story was great man, cant wait for part two, 9/10 |
| 2007-06-30 12:05:44 |
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That was a very different twist on incest and quite erotic. It was kind of sad but well written. good job. please write more like this as you obviously have some new ideas in your head. this is better than reading the same old stuff. 9/10. |
| 2007-07-08 13:32:10 |
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Don't know about this story. It does have a different twist to it but I can't imagine any mother sending her daughter in to fuck her husband in order to get him not to leave them. Haven't read chapter two yet but I have to assume that there will be a threesome with the husband, wife, and the daughter. Sounds sick but what a sex life this fucker is going to have if he stays at home. Gave it an 8/10. |
| 2007-07-10 08:29:49 |
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This story was differant from what most people write here. It was really good and interesting. 8/10 |