| 2007-06-26 01:11:01 |
My Sister Ashley chapter 2
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Yes, keep going. You are very good for a man of only 27 years of age. Excellent. Your writing isn't like others. You didn't make it to where the guy just wants a piece of ass twenty-four seven. Keep going. Even though it is harder to write, it just makes it all worth while in the end to get all these compliments. |
| 2007-06-26 05:10:14 |
My Sister Ashley chapter 2
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your writing abillitys are masterful. please do continue. 10/10 |
| 2007-06-26 14:16:10 |
My Sister Ashley chapter 2
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Not as good as the first, but then again, I've never read anything better than your first story. |
| 2007-06-26 16:52:56 |
My Sister Ashley chapter 2
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very good well writen and it had a unexpected ending so good work and keep them cumming |
| 2007-06-26 21:47:33 |
My Sister Ashley chapter 2
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That is a good story man. The twist in there really blew me away. Its almost like Anne Rice. Keep writing. Good Stuff |