| 2007-07-06 00:43:17 |
My Sister Ashley chapter 2
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The ending was sooooooo KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| 2007-07-06 01:41:09 |
My Sister Ashley chapter 2
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That was a very good ending. I like how Tim got to his new level with his girlfriend and how his sister now knows Tim might not just be as easily fucked with. I like that ending, As much as I'd like more and see more of just Tim and Oriana together, I think leaving it here makes a killer ending. His sister got taught and Tim's on top. Great stories. 10 |
| 2007-07-06 09:44:22 |
My Sister Ashley chapter 2
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The story is great and almost seems true. To the person with the spelling problem, back off on the racial thing there chump, expressing prejudice may not be illegal but is certainly displays a level of ignorance that surely indicates you are the result of your sister and your mother being the same person. |
| 2007-07-06 09:53:44 |
My Sister Ashley chapter 2
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Thank you for your comments, complinets, and suggestions, I appreciate all feedback. I am in the final stages of review for chap3 and it should be posted within the week baring any complications lol. I think it's a lot shorter than this one and due to its content might be a little harder to find but I'm not sure. Umm anything else.... I think some may not like the ending but it was the only thing I could think of to continue the series. Again thanks for the feedback. |
| 2007-07-06 23:59:59 |
My Sister Ashley chapter 2
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the whole story wuz great but i juss got 2 add one thing frisbee? that iz not even a fucking sport the school must be a bitch one if its one of their most popular sports, otherwise the story was a good one i juss feel kinda bad for tim getting beat up by his sister and all lol |