| 2007-06-24 20:19:51 |
Wendy's Gang Rape (part 2 errors corrected rewrite & enhanced)
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3rd please and make it fast! |
| 2007-06-24 23:16:57 |
Wendy's Gang Rape (part 2 errors corrected rewrite & enhanced)
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sick about the stick and i like the dubble gang bang anal and pussy fucked |
| 2007-06-25 00:43:00 |
Wendy's Gang Rape (part 2 errors corrected rewrite & enhanced)
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Instead of wasting your time correcting the errors of part two, your ass should be busy writing part 3...... |
| 2007-06-25 06:13:58 |
Wendy's Gang Rape (part 2 errors corrected rewrite & enhanced)
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LEARN TO WRITE! jesus...screw this guy that said you're wasting your time correcting the errors he's a fucking tool. Dude you need to get some schooling before posting your stories here wtf is with the question mark thing...and stop turning people off with words like "pooper" My guess is that English isn't your first language that or you're waayy too young to be writing these stories. I give you a 2/10 because your writing is that bad, seriously bro we want to be thinking about the story not having to correct your mistakes in our heads bringing us out of the fantasy. |
| 2007-06-25 17:06:24 |
Wendy's Gang Rape (part 2 errors corrected rewrite & enhanced)
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sick bastard its not enough thats a little girl you have to get sadistic too. |