| 2007-06-28 12:05:13 |
The Hidden Camera
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good story but it needs to be longer but just as well writen 8/10 |
| 2007-06-30 12:59:07 |
The Hidden Camera
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Good but way too short. please do a pt 2, slow it down, add more detail, and get the dad involved somehow. 7/10. |
| 2007-07-13 18:08:13 |
The Hidden Camera
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If people want male involvement why dont they look in the male/female section, and cameras have come a long way since then dumbass, he says dark not brown. |
| 2008-01-11 08:31:23 |
The Hidden Camera
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yeah, ur standard night vision doesnt sho actual colours, but other types can |
| 2007-06-24 06:27:07 |
Nebraska lesbian ice cream social 2
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Dude, I got a queston: Why is it that everyone likes the aroma of their own farts? But really,the story was a touch of James Joyce,and a tad of Aliester Crowley.In other words pretty cute.Keep it up! |