| 2007-07-02 16:20:19 |
True, Young Love
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wow..that was terrible. Go to school. |
| 2007-07-02 16:57:42 |
True, Young Love
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please do make a series out of this good story |
| 2007-07-03 00:57:23 |
True, Young Love
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it was ok. but you'd have to try a lot harder next time. I would not advise making another chapter. Make a whole new story. If you do a whole bunch of chapters, it gets boring. |
| 2007-07-03 06:19:25 |
True, Young Love
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Not bad for a first-timer.. Needs work if you wanna make a series out of it though. A whole new start on another story may be best. |
| 2007-07-03 12:10:20 |
True, Young Love
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gay jewish prick face jew |