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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-07-03 14:40:23 | True, Young Love | good story i would like a part 2 you should go on with this carrior but do not stick to 1 story all the time make multipul storys but plz continu your carrier |
| 2007-07-04 13:20:16 | True, Young Love | gd story but a bit more detail next time, |
| 2007-07-04 17:49:08 | True, Young Love | series pleases! |
| 2007-07-05 05:04:17 | True, Young Love | Weird. I hated the "Brian:". It sounded like cybering. 5/10 |
| 2007-07-09 11:51:51 | True, Young Love | "i would not advise making another chapter. make a whole new story. if you do a whole bunch of chapters, it gets boring." That is not entirely true at all some stories out there are wonderful read 'End of The World 1-8' were by far some of the best i've read. Now some people are in for different things i like to read and review (and ofc what guys do lol) but i like to help writers build and write great stories. Continue writing it was a good story work on making the dialogue flow it gets a little confusing in some spots. |