| 2007-07-09 23:47:37 |
kid swap part one
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you got one ot the best stories i have ever read and ive seen some good. ones you got a good style. and i have always hated how people can dis on a great storie it tells what the storie is like by the analoge and so i am a sick fucker...:/ |
| 2007-07-23 23:38:26 |
kid swap part one
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Not bad, slow down the action a little, maybe more description -- but you know all the adults are going to jail...! |
| 2007-07-28 14:14:24 |
kid swap part one
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That story was sick and wrong, but at least it was well written. I liked how descriptive it was, and the fact that it wasn't full of ridiculous typos like a lot of the stories on here. I don't know if I can handle reading all the other chapters though. Fucking little kids is messed up. |
| 2007-08-02 18:35:52 |
kid swap part one
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That is sick! You are a fucking pervert pedophile and should be rotting in jail! |
| 2007-08-04 11:37:09 |
kid swap part one
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Sick, sick sick |