| 2007-07-03 01:44:04 |
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sick fucks |
| 2007-07-03 01:51:57 |
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Eh, not that great. Try proof reading. And learn how to write dialogue. It is a good idea poorly execyted, keep trying. |
| 2007-07-03 22:42:08 |
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Hey justhorny......go fuck yourself !!! Don't lecture me you old bastard......if I call this writer a sick fuck that's exactly what I mean. If you don't agree with it I don't care. You got that you old fossil?!?! |
| 2007-07-04 02:23:31 |
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Decent story...better than most. Reader 22:44 you're a angry idiot. |
| 2007-07-04 23:26:07 |
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interesting |