| 2006-10-20 14:55:54 |
Ember and Ashe - Chapter One_(1)
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it was very good |
| 2007-10-29 13:56:20 |
Ember and Ashe - Chapter One_(1)
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Excellent piece of writing. With some rework will hav e the beginnings of a novel. Hope the tendency to over-instill sex into the soul of the work will not ruin the quality. |
| 2004-02-15 11:39:37 |
Ember and Ashe - Chapter Two_(0)
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salu les filles |
| 2004-02-15 11:39:37 |
Ember and Ashe - Chapter Two_(1)
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salu les filles |
| 2004-03-29 17:01:53 |
A Burning Passion_(0)
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ok but im not sure i like the way it supposed to be happening to the reader, doesnt quite work. |