| 2004-09-28 18:54:43 |
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I think that the story lets you know what a girl feels when she is being made love to. I somtimes wish there was a way to record the sensations and play them back when alone |
| 2004-10-16 02:59:42 |
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my what a great story for guys and gals alike! personally i don't swing for stories like this but man that was irresistably hot... i think i got a few new ideas for my girlfriend just from the first 4 paragraphs of the main persons perspective of what that stuff does to her body |
| 2005-01-14 14:15:22 |
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This was very erotic and what does it matter about the English it was open and sincere as to how making love makes her feel. You go girl and not only that but your very lucky ot have found a guy that can rock your world. |
| 2005-03-13 16:18:23 |
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I think you're story is good. It's not the typical type of story we see here. we have true feelings involed, instead of the bull shit we read on here everyday This is 1 hot story. |
| 2007-03-23 23:14:07 |
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great concept but poorly articulated... better use of word play or maybe even some sort of poem style.. |