| 2004-10-08 15:13:52 |
Unbelievable
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it sounds like a 5th grader wrote it |
| 2004-10-19 11:18:34 |
Unbelievable
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Writing stinks. Story OK. What's with the stupid waist sizes? |
| 2005-01-08 12:23:16 |
Unbelievable
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fuckin shit |
| 2005-04-27 12:00:41 |
Unbelievable
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I thought it was a good story. It made me so horny, and made me think of something to try with my boyfriend. ;) The writing as far as grammar goes.... well, you need to go back to middle school and learn how to write. |
| 2005-06-12 13:03:28 |
Unbelievable
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liked it. give us some more with some ass licking |