| 2004-04-16 16:55:32 |
My Uncontrollable Pasion For Mother
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That us one sick story. |
| 2004-05-06 18:47:03 |
My Uncontrollable Pasion For Mother
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This was good but obviously writen in haste. |
| 2004-05-12 01:53:25 |
My Uncontrollable Pasion For Mother
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The story stared up good, but then he suddenly ass rams her and she dosent care? Too unrealistic and bad spelling. Take some time to make it better, it was going good, but it needs work. |
| 2004-05-17 17:36:37 |
My Uncontrollable Pasion For Mother
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learn to spell u dumb fuk if u could spell the story would be better |
| 2004-07-12 02:40:30 |
My Uncontrollable Pasion For Mother
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its a good story, hell no does it sounds real, cuz the mom didnt care, but its a good fantasy story, and learn to spell too :) |