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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-07-11 14:27:26 | Taking Amy | It was pretty good, though you sorta jumped around a lot. Go back through it and make the time progession a little more smooth. Also a very VERY important word you need to learn - PARAGRAPH. Write the story first in Word, edit it then copy it into xnxx. That way the formatting will already be set. Keep writing. |
| 2007-07-11 17:40:41 | Taking Amy | shit was badd |
| 2007-07-11 22:01:33 | Taking Amy | way too long took one look at it and mad me not wanna read it. 1/10 |
| 2007-07-12 00:52:02 | Taking Amy | spellcheck mother fucker do u use it? |
| 2007-07-12 23:36:36 | Taking Amy | try double spacing, learn to spell, this is child rape, don't write any more creep, also to long |