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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-07-13 01:39:39 | Taking Amy | spell check next but good story |
| 2007-07-14 16:44:42 | Taking Amy | Quality time indeed! You bring new meaning to that term. Interesting content, good flash backs, needs stylistic work. I've read much worse. 6/10 |
| 2007-07-15 06:49:10 | Taking Amy | Great Story. Shows how every girl should be, cum hungry and always horney. And at young age too...sweet |
| 2007-07-16 16:04:29 | Taking Amy | I disagree with almost every other comment, the story was good, the fact that you did in fact mispell alot, is fine, us online readers are Built too read crappy "pen manship". Over all, great, my current lover started when she was 8, not by choice but she is WONDERFUL.Keep writing, spell check alittle, not top priority, your top priority is too make proper paragraphs, and do it in installments, maybe weekly. Have a great day. |
| 2007-07-17 17:59:22 | Taking Amy | very nice too long for one try breaking it up into chaptetrs |