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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-07-12 17:13:23 | she wanted it hard so i gave it to her hard | You're not protected by the pill the first day you take it sweetie. Its seven days then you're 98 percent protected. |
| 2007-07-12 17:37:56 | she wanted it hard so i gave it to her hard | Read the first two paragraphs only. That was enough for me. This was not written by anyone over the age of 13. I figured that it would be a waste of time to continue. Being a fantasy is ok but the writing is ssssoooooo bad. No rating--doesn't deserve one. |
| 2007-07-12 19:40:00 | she wanted it hard so i gave it to her hard | Very bad spelling and grammar. Ever heared of capital letters? Also you couldn't seem to decide between 1st or 3rd person perspective. A few mistakes is perfectly acceptable, but this story is quite unreadable. |
| 2007-07-12 19:56:17 | she wanted it hard so i gave it to her hard | 5'3? Must of been a midget not "one of the tallest guys around" |
| 2007-07-12 20:54:40 | she wanted it hard so i gave it to her hard | I couldn't even get through the whole story the vocabulary was so bad. Spell check, spell check... and did I mention spell check? Learn it, love it, USE IT! |