| 2007-11-15 23:50:57 |
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it was hot...until it stated that corey was 12. what in the fuck? way way way too young, and now i feel like a fucking pedophile. seriously. even more disgusting is how skillful she was. ur a good writer, but plz keep all characters above the goddamn 7th grade next time kthx |
| 2008-01-23 21:46:11 |
Camryn: C03
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It was OK but the 2nd & 1st were better |
| 2008-02-16 17:53:52 |
Camryn: C03
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12 is not to young in fact if anything its to old thats why i and others go to young if you dont like it find something you do there are plenty of choses |
| 2007-07-14 20:07:28 |
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still verry good, too bad though that you don't include as much sex anymore. |
| 2007-07-15 00:41:29 |
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Awesome story. Honestly too good for this site. I read a lot of sci fi an fantasy and this is professional quality material. |